Hi @SouthCoastUrbex - you asked for some constructive feedback in your welcome thread, so i'll fire away with mine.
The good bits.
You have a half decent location, I havent heard of it before so am interested to see it.
You have entered a decent bit of history, thats always a good start.
There is no distracting music to the video.
The not so good bits.
Videos in my opinon without any shred of audio to them have very little value. You notice I pointed this out in the good bits of the explore, and thats because its usually a pretty fine line between being distracting and adding value. Commentry is golden ticket. This report would tell a far better story in picture format as you have made a decent introduction with history.
Its way, way too long. No one is going to keep watching a YouTube explore (especially with no narrative) for more than a few minutes.
If you hadn't specified in your intro what the explore was, I wouldnt have a clue.